Posted by Leslie on Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 7:01pm.
Is this sentence grammatically correct? If not how can i fix it?
Those who do have what they want crave for more; they want love and affection.
Grammar - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 7:07pm
It's grammatically correct -- but I'd omit "do."
However, it doesn't make a lot of sense. If they have what they want, how can they crave more?
Do you mean?
Those who have all the money they want often crave love and affection.
Grammar - Leslie, Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 7:09pm
I meant kids that get everything they want often want more. Like they begin to believe that being spoiled with items is not everything.
Grammar - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 7:31pm
Are you saying they want more "toys?" Or are they dissatisfied because they also need love and affection?
Grammar - Leslie, Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 7:42pm
In this sentence should it be will or would? Why will I want to have everything except for love?
Grammar - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 7:46pm
I think "would" is better there.
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