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How does this sound now? Each day too many of our children go to school to learn, only to witness some form of school violence -- school violence in the form of bullying, disrespect toward authority figures, trash talking, and the secret carrying and displaying of dangerous weapons, to name a few.

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    Each day many of our children who are in school to learn, bear witness to some form of school violence consisting of bullying, disrespect toward authority figures, verbal/threatening abuse and the secret carrying and displaying of dangerous weapons, to name a few.

    Just how I would word it, but your way was just as fine. :)

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