posted by Bryan on .
Can someone proofread the text before I place it in the about us section on a website I'm creating.
Bryan Martin, Freelance Marketer, has been promoting and marketing businesses since 2008. He began studying how business operates and their potential grow through marketing, deciding to pursue an small business and management degree in July of 2008. He is dedicated to helping businesses meet short and long-term goals through marketing strategies. His patience and determination ensures that every business receives the best of service.
Mr. Martin started Mirror Marketing LLC in 2010. He is committed to helping you identify and reach your goals. He uses the best strategies methods and creative ideas the industry has to offer. Mirror Marketing LLC is a marketing services.
I hope you're better at marketing than proofreading.
He began studying how business operates and their faulty pronoun reference
potential grow growth? through marketing, deciding to pursue an small business and management degree in July of 2008. (What did you DO about your decision? Did you earn this degree?)
Mirror Marketing LLC is a marketing services. a services?
I'm not sold. In addition to sloppy writing, you also haven't given specifics about how you market businesses.
What results have you achieved?
That's why I asked for proofreading.
Specifics are included in the other writing I did not have to go into detail for what I needed proofread.
I proofread it and posted corrections. But I'm amazed you didn't catch these obvious errors.