posted by dwayne .
How can I rewrite this sentence.
Only recently, and only in particular countries and cultures, has the abuse of children come to be seen as a major social problem and a main cause of many people's suffering and personal problems. of course children ahve been abused throughout human history.
First, circle or underline the most important words you want to keep -- and do not repeat any. Then rewrite.
Let us know what you come up with.
well this is not helping me in no way. i could have figured that much out. so thanks for nothing.
If you're not willing to try, there's not much anyone can do for you. Sorry.
Try omitting the second sentence. Then try again to get rid of other repeated ideas.