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Homework Help: language please check my work

Posted by me on Wednesday, April 14, 2010 at 6:19pm.

-revise the sentence for a clear meaning here is the sentence

Surgeons moved around the operating room, skillfully using tools wearing slippers.

-the revised sentence

Surgeons,wearing slippers,moved around the operating room skillfully using their tools.

please if there is a more revised sentence please post it thank you

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