-revise the sentence for a clear meaning here is the sentence
Surgeons moved around the operating room, skillfully using tools wearing slippers.
-the revised sentence
Surgeons,wearing slippers,moved around the operating room skillfully using their tools.
please if there is a more revised sentence please post it thank you
language please check my work - bobpursley, Wednesday, April 14, 2010 at 6:20pm
Your revision is ok.