Posted by Anonymous on Tuesday, April 13, 2010 at 10:08pm.
Proofread only.
Which the force = drop "Which" and begin with "The force"
As the speed is equal to the resistance of the egg. = this sounds more like it requires a comma after egg, not period?
in till the gravity = until.....makes the speed the same (as what?)
egg stops to the ground = stops at the ground?
lessen the impacts = would it not be "impact" (singular) for it will not bounce, will it? as it hits to the ground, = drop "to" = as it hits the ground
cushion in the space . = drop "in the space" and end with cushion. (?)
it is first layer = add "the" = it is the first layer
protection TO the shock? Aren't you protecting the egg and not the shock? protection against the shock?
Sra
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