Can you check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much for your help.
1)Big Brother is a TV programme (or a reality show?) about people and relationships.
2) In particular, contestants have to stay in the same house for ten weeks. 3) They have to make their own food, do their own washing and tidy the house. Fortunately, they don't have to be on cameras twenty-four hours seven days a week.
4) In other words, you can see how they spend their daily routine: how they cook, clean their roooms and so on.
5) Most people find it boring to watch how people spend their daily routine. They think that it is a tired programme with no ideas. It is cheap, boring TV and don't know why people keep watching it
5)Contestants also have to vote every two weeks for two people to leave, then the public votes.
6) They work hard because they want to become stars. They want to make the break from normal life into the big time (does it mean: "They want to change their life and do something different?)
7) I'm a down-to-earth person. I see things black and white (how can I rephrase it?) and follow rules.
1 & 2 = yes
3 = be on cameras = usually singular = on camera
4 = yes
5 = and don't know = subject not clear
You have two #5's = 2nd yes
6. they want MORE than just a normal life
7. I see things IN black and white
(rephrase which part = I see things clearly)
Sra
Sure! Here is a review of the sentences you provided along with some suggested changes:
1) "Big Brother is a TV program (or reality show) that focuses on people and their relationships."
- This sentence appears to be accurate, but you may want to clarify whether you are referring to the general concept of a reality show or the specific TV program called "Big Brother."
2) "In the show, contestants are required to stay in the same house for ten weeks."
- This sentence is clear and concise.
3) "They must handle their own chores such as cooking, laundry, and housekeeping. Fortunately, they are not monitored by cameras 24/7."
- I rephrased this sentence to make it clearer and more grammatically correct. Additionally, I changed "do their own washing" to "handle their own chores."
4) "In other words, the show provides a glimpse into the contestants' daily routines, including cooking and cleaning their rooms."
- This sentence is clear and effectively conveys the information.
5) "Many people find watching the contestants' daily routines to be monotonous, considering the program lacking creativity. It is often perceived as a low-budget and uninteresting TV show, leading some to question its popularity."
- I rephrased this sentence to improve the structure and clarity of the statement.
6) "Contestants also participate in voting every two weeks to eliminate two people, and then the public votes."
- This sentence is accurate and well-phrased.
7) "Contestants work hard because they aspire to become stars and transition from their normal lives to the realm of fame and success."
- I rephrased this sentence to provide a clearer explanation of what it means to "make the break from normal life into the big time."
8) "I am a practical person who sees things in a straightforward manner and adheres to rules."
- I rephrased this sentence to provide a clearer explanation of being a "down-to-earth" person who thinks in black and white terms.
Overall, the sentences have been revised to improve clarity and readability.