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Posted by on Monday, April 12, 2010 at 7:22pm.

Drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who now secretively use Growth Hormones that are tough to detect through ordinary methods like urine samples.

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 7:23pm

    Sorry* Is this a better thesis ?

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 7:27pm

    Still too much.

    End the sentence after hormones.

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 7:43pm

    Honestly ! What would you advise me to stick to at this point . Because I have attempted writing atleast 5 thesis statements and I am dreaded !!

    If I go about the statement I put above I do not have enough sources to defend my argument either .


    Please do advise

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 7:45pm

    or...

    Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not bin successful because athletes are now using hard to detect growth hormones which calls for a analysis of better approaches


    I hope you are patient with me .

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 7:58pm

    Sure -- I'm patient. :-)

    I suggest you stick with this:

    Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not been successful because athletes are now using hard-to-detect growth hormones.

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 8:02pm

    I hope I do well on this paper because writing this thesis was the hardest.

    Thanks for all your help I really do appreciate it !!

  • English - , Monday, April 12, 2010 at 8:12pm

    You're very welcome. I'm sure you'll do well on this paper.

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