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I have to write an eight-sentence paragraph that fully develops this topic.
A high school diploma is important to my future......
(i know it's not that great of a topic but i have no options)
but i keep going in circles and i can't get my ideas together .I keep wondering off the topic. Can anyone help me write this down.
my main points are its the first step to a higher level of education. I need it for college admissions (gate way to college.)which will then lead me to a sucessful career in medical field.
Read this site and do what it says.
Then jot down the supporting ideas for your topic sentence.
When you have done these things then put your paragraph together...and repost. We will be happy to help you further with ideas and corrections.