Homework Help: language arts

Posted by maggie on Sunday, April 4, 2010 at 5:33pm.

did i punctuate this sentence correctly?

"They wanted to have the woman give birth to healthy babies, but they wanted to get as much work out of the woman as possible; therefore, the women were given lighter tasks."

language arts - Ms. Sue, Sunday, April 4, 2010 at 5:41pm
It's too long.

You could make it two sentences, or you could reword it.

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