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Critique this paragraph:Wife beating affects a woman both physically and emotionally. Having little or no charge of financial matters, or plans, these women devote themselves to their husbands and families, often resulting in a loss of friendship and interests. They live in constant fear of not being able to please their husbands. These women are always afraid of doing something wrong and as a consequence suffer emotionally and physically. Sometimes a man hits his wife in the stomach during pregnancy causing either a miscarriage or birth defect. By hitting his wife in this sensitive area he is both releasing his tensions and also unconsciously ending an undesired pregnancy, which would have been more of a burden on him.
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