I'm writing about teachers giving students too much homework
my supporting topics:
needs more time
interfering with our lives
how can i make them parallel in a sentence?
please help and thank you
essay - Ms. Sue, Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 6:55pm
Your supporting topics are nebulous and all say about the same thing.
How is interfering with lives different than "outside activities" and "needs more time?"