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Posted by on Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 6:25pm.

I'm writing about teachers giving students too much homework

my supporting topics:
needs more time
outside activities
interfering with our lives

how can i make them parallel in a sentence?

please help and thank you

  • essay - , Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 6:55pm

    Your supporting topics are nebulous and all say about the same thing.

    How is interfering with lives different than "outside activities" and "needs more time?"

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