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Homework Help: To Ms. Sue

Posted by Sara on Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 5:20pm.

Ms. Sue can you Please edit this; I'll accept any other changes made by you, thanks. Can you please edit this in paragraph mode; it's easier for me to pick out the mistakes I've made that way. Thank You:-)

I feel the pain of pins and needles. I open my eyes and vanish from my dream. There, I find my heart to be thudding and sweat covering me from head to toe. It oozes out of unknown pores. The sharp pain in my stomach starts to arise. I am frightened; I do not at any cost want to throw up. I scrunch up my body and start to swallow; each time more rapidly. There was no way I was going to let this volcano of vomit erupt on my bed, so I run to the bathroom and let it explode in the toilet. As it makes its arrival up my throat, tears shoot out of my eyes, and everything goes blank. I thought that I would fade out, but luckily I didnít. My stomach feels really empty, and hurts like grief. I donít feel like getting up; I wish to get rid of this pain before the weekend arrives. I freshen up and unlock the bathroom door, I hear voices; itís my mom. She asks me if Iím alright. I tell her that I have caught the stomach flu and am feeling really frail. She tells me to go and take some medicine, but I donít. I am unable to walk and see in the gloomy dark. I go back to bed with a miserable mood and ..........

I am unable to finish the ending with an outrageous sentence.

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