Posted by christopher on Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 10:53am.
I don't see any sentence combining here.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/combining_skills.htm
how about this for paralleism
The Rochester Institute of Technology in New York State chose 150 students born on June 12 1979. Each received a grant of $1,500 per year. These awards were given to select students to honor the school’s 150th anniversary.
need commas in correct places in the date
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
See #10
The revision doesn't make the clear connection between the June 12th date and the school's anniversary date.
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