Posted by christopher on Wednesday, March 24, 2010 at 10:58pm.
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Here is my answer does this make sense?
In return for their scholarships, Wooster’s bagpipers use their bagpipes for the school’s football team, while drummers are required to drum for the team and the dancers have to cheer for the athletes from the sidelines.
It makes sense -- but to get a better parallel structure -- it should be:
In return for their scholarships, Wooster’s bagpipers use their bagpipes for the school’s football team, drummers drum for the team, and the dancers cheer for the athletes.
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