Please take all your time to go throught this. I want it to be edited well, thanks :-)
This is very good, Sara. I wonder about taking "gravel," though. What is "gravel" in this context?
Sorry, I mean taking "Gravol"
Does my pragraph fit this:
The paper is superior and may draw upon any number of factors, such as maturity of style, depth of discussion, effectiveness of argument, use of literary and/or rhetorical devices, sophistication of wit, or quality of imagination. This composition exhibits an effective writing style and a sophisticated use of language.
I changed it a bit. Could you please edit it, I'll accept any changes made by you.:-)
I awoke from my dream sweating with? I tried to go back to sleep, but was unable to. I knew that something was wrong; I had never woken up during a dream, unless if it was a nightmare of course. I tried to scrunch up my body to get rid of the ache. I kept on swallowing and swallowing; each time more rapidly. I knew that a volcano was about to erupt, so I ran to the bathroom and let it blow out. I felt like I was going to die right there. I wasn’t in the mood to go back to sleep. I felt like staying in the bathroom by the sink. My parents got up as well, and asked me if something was the matter. I told them that I caught the flu my siblings had. My parents suggested to me that I take gravol, but I was too weak to, and went back to bed. My parents quickly fell asleep, while I was still awake with the stomach pain. I somehow fell asleep later on, praying not to break loose from my dreams again.
Sorry I meant staying in the bathroom by the toilet.
Yes, it fits the requirements.
I suggest, though, that you let it sit a day or two (if you have time) and let your mind mull it over.
My husband was an author and always let his work sit a day or two before editing and reediting it.
Alright, thank you :-)
You're welcome. :-)
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