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July 25, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by Franco on Sunday, March 7, 2010 at 6:32am.

Thank you for your last corrections!
Can you check following sentences, too please?

1) The narrator may be internal to the story, that is a character in the story, either the protagonist or a witness. It (?) may also be a voice outside the story, who tells events he has not taken part in. (Why is it correct to use "it")
2) A simile is a comparison between two dissimilar things using connective words (is "through" the use of connective words possible?)
3) The Roman conquest dates back to 47 AD and (took place?) under Emperor Claudius (can you say under the Empire of Claudius?)
4) After a first invasion by Julius Caesar the Romans took possession of the southern part of the island.
5)They controlled the island by force (and not "by the army"?)
6) He retreated his soldiers to defend Rome from a Barbarian attack. (can you say "to face up to a Barbarian attack on Rome?")

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