Posted by Sara on Tuesday, February 23, 2010 at 8:16pm.
This is your original assignment:
Now it says draw a word picture of the "ideal male"
You have done a great job. You've fulfilled the assignment.
I don't even think you need to describe his looks -- although you could include that -- if it's important to you.
Oh, okay, thanks. I was starting this off like this:
A man can have many types of characteristics. He can be adorable, or detestable. He can be attractive, or ugly. He can have a nice personality, appearance, background, and just have a good nature itself.
Sara! Your paragraph is fine! Please don't complicate it with extraneous and unnecessary words.
have I also included what a man values and behaves as well?
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