Homework Help: writing

Posted by ruby on Tuesday, February 23, 2010 at 7:43pm.

Can you help me correct these sentences?
1.She wants to become an environmental scientist she is especially interested in marine life.
2.If she can get a scholarship she would like to spend her senior year in New Zealand.
3.The Great Coral Reef almost cicles New Zealand it has more marine life than anywhere else in the world.

writing - Ms. Sue, Tuesday, February 23, 2010 at 7:49pm
Numbers 1 and 3 are run-on sentences and need to be divided into two sentences.

Number is fine, except it needs a comma.

How would you correct these sentences?
writing - Ms. Sue, Tuesday, February 23, 2010 at 7:50pm
Number 2 is fine, except it needs a comma.

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