Can you check these sentences for me, please?
Thank you very much
1) They are going on a weekend school trip to Stratford and are excited about it.
2) They are meeting at Paddington Station at 7.30
3) They are staying at the Falcon Hotel.
4)They are having breakfast and dinner at the hotel, but they are free to have lunch where they like (?)
5) In the afternoon they are going sightseeing in Stratford
6) Storm warns Mickey not to be late for the train.
7) She is inviting a friend home (?) this afternoon.
8) She is driving me to a friend's house, who is having a party.
9) I have two hours PE a week, but I have three hours of French a week
Instead of doing normal training we practise (?) golf. (we do a golf course). How many hours of (?) French do you have a week (every week?)
9) I have two hours of PE a week, but I have three hours of French a week.
Instead of doing normal training, we practice golf. How many hours of French do you have a week?
7:30....use a colon. For clarity, a.m. or p.m.
4 , 7 are fine.
The house isn't having the party. She is driving me to a party at a friend's house.
practice golf is fine.
1) The sentence "They are going on a weekend school trip to Stratford and are excited about it" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it.
2) The sentence "They are meeting at Paddington Station at 7.30" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it.
3) The sentence "They are staying at the Falcon Hotel" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it.
4) The sentence "They are having breakfast and dinner at the hotel, but they are free to have lunch where they like" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it. However, there is a question mark at the end which suggests uncertainty. If you are unsure about whether they are free to have lunch wherever they like, you can rephrase the sentence to make it clearer. For example, "They are having breakfast and dinner at the hotel, but it is not specified where they will have lunch."
5) The sentence "In the afternoon they are going sightseeing in Stratford" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it.
6) The sentence "Storm warns Mickey not to be late for the train" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it.
7) The sentence "She is inviting a friend home this afternoon" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it. However, there is a question mark at the end which suggests uncertainty. If you are unsure about whether the person is actually inviting a friend home, you can rephrase the sentence to make it clearer. For example, "Is she inviting a friend home this afternoon?"
8) The sentence "She is driving me to a friend's house, who is having a party" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it. However, the use of a comma before "who" is not necessary. The correct punctuation would be "She is driving me to a friend's house who is having a party."
9) The sentence "I have two hours PE a week, but I have three hours of French a week" is grammatically correct. There doesn't appear to be any errors or issues with it.
Instead of doing normal training, we practice golf. How many hours of French do you have every week?" is a suggestion to improve clarity and remove any uncertainty.