I was unable to stop. I kept going and going, something was out there which was bringing me closer to itself.
Ms. Sue this is the first part I'll post the other one...
This couldn't be a nightmare, everything seemed so realistic. As I approached to where I was being lead I saw a creepy, mysterious, old house.
Great!
I suggest you put a period after the second "going." Then your last sentence in that part would be:
Something was out there which was bring me closer to it.
For the second part, use a semicolon after nightmare.
The atmosphere around me
w a s really creepy.
As I made a step, the ice below my feet crunched.
I could hear howls and groans somewhere near.
I could smell mold
plud stale tobacco
and s t a l e t o b a c c o
Looks great!
"plus stale tobacco"