Posted by Sara on Monday, February 8, 2010 at 9:55pm.
We are working on descriptive writing and right now I have to do a whole description on a Old House.
Touch: slimy doorknob
Sights: broken steps
Spider webs on door
Colours: Brown door
Comparisons: The damaged rooftop looks like an exploded volcano?
Could you please add a few more to each list; I really need help with the comparisons. Also, is there more to descriptive writing other than these senses, and comparisons.
- English - Ms. Sue, Monday, February 8, 2010 at 10:14pm
You have an excellent start, Sara.
Once proud as a courtesan; now dejected as a prostitute
Laughter of children now replaced by the sighs of their ghosts
My grandmother's pride; my mother's home; my albatross
This site may give you more ideas about descriptive writing.
- English - Sara, Monday, February 8, 2010 at 10:17pm
Thank you Ms. Sue, you are very supportive :-)
- English - Ms. Sue, Monday, February 8, 2010 at 10:19pm
You're very welcome, Sara.
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