You have an excellent start, Sara.
Once proud as a courtesan; now dejected as a prostitute
Laughter of children now replaced by the sighs of their ghosts
My grandmother's pride; my mother's home; my albatross
This site may give you more ideas about descriptive writing.
Thank you Ms. Sue, you are very supportive :-)
You're very welcome, Sara.
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