I forgot to include these other three paragraphs. I really hope you can help me with them, too. I thank you all.
6) Elizabeth walks three miles to look after her sister. Mr Darcy feels attracted by her but he says her low connections prevent him from falling in love. He wants Elizabeth to dance with him. She is surprised at his gallantry but refuses to dance with him.
7) Mr Bennet receives a letter from his cousin, the Reverend Mr Collins. He is described as a tall, heavy-looking young man of twenty-five. His manners are very formal. As Mr Bennet’s estate is entailed, he will inherit Mr Bennet’s property on his death. He intends to marry one of Mr Bennet’s daughters and announces his imminent arrival at Longbourn.
8)Meanwhile, there is another arrival in the district, Mr Wickham, a young officer in the Militia. When Mr Darcy meets him, he changes his colour and rides on with his friend.
English - SraJMcGin, Monday, February 8, 2010 at 3:37pm
Mr Darcy feels attracted by her = feeks attracted TO her...
Everything else looks fine. I notice you use British English punctuation and spelling, so I'll not change any of that!