I don't know if i can post what i have done so far but i wanted someone to point me in the right direction..

I will critically evaluate every aspect of the speech that the President made especially his delivery, audience, movements, eye contact, posture, diction, tone, and message.
From the beginning, President Barack Obama had a serious face which clearly projected how serious and important his speech was. The president’s speech was organized even though the audience was impatient and continuously interrupting. I felt that his speech transitioned from one subject to the other smoothly. This made the audience understand his point and the message.

The message was coherent and clear mainly because it painted a clear picture as to where and how he wants to lead us. This speech had many proposals for job creation and federal deficit reduction.
The tone was pretty much the same throughout the speech even though he tried to put in a joke a two. I believe that’s because of the seriousness of the matter the speech was mono.
My observation throughout the speech was that the presidents maintained proper eye contact while I was watching him on TV. His posture was that of a professional. His posture was straight and he moved from side to side behind the podium. The audience was attentive and some what inpatient.

Over all President Obama is the best speaker that I have heard. He can have you listen for hours.

what's the topic? Are you doing presentations?

If you want, I would combine and re-word this sentence below

His posture was that of a professional. His posture was straight and he moved from side to side behind the podium.

His posture was that of a professional and straight, therefore, he moved from side to side behind the podium.

thank you this helped

Based on what you have described, it sounds like you have already analyzed and evaluated several aspects of President Barack Obama's speech. Here are some steps you can take to further develop your evaluation:

1. Expand on the delivery: In addition to noting the seriousness of the president's face, consider his vocal projection, pace, and emphasis. Pay attention to any gestures or movements that he used to reinforce his message. Did he appear confident and in control throughout the speech?

2. Analyze the audience reaction: Describe how the audience responded to the president's speech. Did their impatience or interruptions affect his delivery or message? Did they react positively or negatively to specific points he made? How did the president engage with the audience despite their restlessness?

3. Assess the diction and tone: Go beyond noting that the tone was serious and consistent throughout. Analyze the language choices the president made and how they contributed to the overall impact of his speech. Was his diction clear and easy to understand? Did he effectively use rhetorical devices or figures of speech?

4. Explore the message and its coherence: Provide specific examples of how the president's speech was organized and had smooth transitions between subjects. Did he explain his proposals for job creation and federal deficit reduction in a way that made sense and resonated with the audience? Did his message have a clear structure and logical progression?

5. Reflect on the impact of eye contact, posture, and movement: Describe how the president's maintained proper eye contact with the audience, both in person and on TV. Explain how his posture and movements behind the podium added to his professionalism and overall delivery. Did these nonverbal aspects of his speech contribute to his effectiveness as a speaker?

6. Summarize your overall assessment: Reiterate your belief that President Obama is the best speaker you have heard, but provide specific examples or evidence to support this claim. What specifically sets him apart as a speaker? Were there any aspects of his speech that could be improved upon?

Remember, these are just suggestions on how to further develop and analyze your evaluation of the speech. Feel free to add any additional insights, observations, or criticisms that you may have.