Posted by Franco on Wednesday, February 3, 2010 at 9:44am.
Thank you very much for your last corrections.
Here are some more sentences about Christmas holidays I would like you to check.
1) How long did your Chrismas holidays last?
2) How long did it take you to eat your Christmas lunch? OR How much time (How long) did you spend eating your Christmas lunch?
3) Where did you stay in the mountains?
4) Who did you stay in the mountains with? Have you got a second-holiday home in the mountains?
5) How often did you eat at the restaurant during your holidays?
How much did it cost to eat at the restaurant? OR How much did you spend on your Christmas lunch at the restaurant?
6) How much money did you spend on your presents?
7) Who did you invite to your party?
8)Did you use up all your pocket money?
What did you receive as a Christmas present from your parents?
9)What did your best friend give you as a Christmas present?
10)How long did it take you to dress the Christmas tree?
11) Did you go anywhere interesting? 12) Did you go sightseeing? Did you take any pictures? Did you make any new friends?
13)What food did you eat the most often during your Christmas holidays?
14) What did your Christmas lunch constist of? How was it?OR What did you have for Christmas lunch OR for lunch on Christmas Day???
8) What food did you like the best? What did you have for your starter?
What did you have to drink?
9) What food did your mother cook the best?
10) When was the last time you ate at the restaurant? OR When did you last eat at the restaurant?
11)What did you help your mum with (OR to do?)
12) What does your father do as a job?
13) What time did you leave for the seaside/mountains?
14) How long did you take to do your holiday homework? Did your teachers give (or set?) you a lot of homework?
15) Did you get any help to do it?
Thank you very much
- English - SraJMcGin, Wednesday, February 3, 2010 at 9:53am
4. Who is the subject but in this sentence you is the subject. Whom is the objective case and that's what you need here. It's best to NOT end a sentence with a preposition. Who did you stay in the mountains with? = With whom did you stay in the mountains?
7. Same type of error as #4 with who/whom. Who did you invite to your party? = Whom did you invite...
14. (or set?) = no, don't use that
Everything else looks good!
Answer this Question
English - I really hope someone can check my sentences on Christmas holidays. ...
English - Can you pleas help me check these sentences, please? Thank you very ...
English - Thank you again for your last corrections! Can you help me check these...
English - Can someone help me find the mistakes in the following sentences? The ...
English - I forgot to include these other two sentences, I would like you to ...
English - Can you check these 6 paragraphs, please? 1) During my Christmas ...
English - Can you please tell if the word choice is correct and how I can ...
English - Can you check the following paragraphs for me? Thanks a lot 1) I spent...
Holidays - For a US history research paper, What are the top three holidays in ...
English - Can you check the use of the following phrasal verbs, please? 1) First...