J'aime faire du shopping au centre commercial et aux grands magasins. Mes amis uniquement font du shopping au centre commercial. J'aime porter des t-shirts longs, jeans, pantalons,

pulls, et ce que je suis comfortable dans l'école. Les vêtements que j'achète sont assez chers. Ils peuvent coûter environ trente dollars. Si elles sont disponibles à la vente alors ils peuvent coûter près de dix dollars.

In english this is what i want to say:
I like to shop at malls and department stores. My friends like to shop only at the mall. I like wearing long t-shirts, jeans, pants,sweaters, and what I am comfortable in, at school. The clothes I buy are usually expensive. They can cost around thirty dollars. If they are on sale then they can cost around 10.

Si elles sont = s'ils sont.....vous n'avez compris ce que j'ai écrit?

et ce qui me convient? = what is suitable for me?

Sra (aka Mme)

Your statement is clear and well-explained. You mentioned that you enjoy shopping at malls and department stores, specifically mentioning your preference for wearing long t-shirts, jeans, pants, and sweaters at school. You also noted that the clothes you buy are generally expensive, with an average cost of around thirty dollars. However, if the items are on sale, they can be priced at around ten dollars.