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Posted by Franco on Saturday, January 23, 2010 at 10:15am.

Can you help me check this paragraph?
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1) When I was a child, I went to the seaside with my family and some of my parentsí friends. One day it was very hot so I decided to go into the water with my friends and our small inflatable mattress.
2)We swam dragging the inflatable mattress with us but we didnít realize that the more we swam the more the water became deep and when we discovered it , it was too late.
We were far away from the beach and we didnít see our parents.
3) We were scared, we shouted but we werenít alone because near us there were two guys who were about 15 years old and they brought us on their inflatable mattress, that was bigger than ours.
4)So, thanks to them, we arrived on the beach. We were scared but save

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