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Posted by anu on Thursday, January 14, 2010 at 8:39am.

can you proof read for me.

In second part of the novel is more interesting from the first part. Alex was bored so Lao Xu told him the story about Zhou and Zhu Ge-Laing. It was very interesting story about Chinese history. Alex is very good to learn things that he wants to learn. He had learn lots of word in Chinese and he can understand little bit of Chinese. I think he also catch up things very fast like my sister. Eddie and Alex dad Ted was very busy in this part because Gorbachev is coming to Beijing. In three or four pages, they were busy working. That was a little boring part but suddenly the story got more interesting because Lao Xu was talking on the phone and everyone was worried about what happened while he was talking. Lao Xu was afraid because all the students were demanding their demands. Government will get harsh because Gorbachev is coming to Beijing. I am feeling worried about Lao Xu because he is so afraid of the government reaction about student demands. Next day, Alex went to Tian An Men Square. In Tian An Men Square there are two million students. The students were demanding, yelling and all of them were very loud for their demands. Alex went to interview some students. I thought that he is going to in a danger or in a trouble. He met a student who can speak in English and he interviewed him. There was a big crowd so Alex was feeling uncomfortable and he said that to meet him again. He went to university to find the same student he met at Tian An Men Square. If I was in his place I would not try to find him again. Student were on hunger strike because government didn't agreed demands. Every body were laid on the floor and getting weak . I think it was horrible maybe government agree their demands. Eddie and Ted can't send any information to Canada because there is material law . Even Lao Xu cant not help them because of the law but he said to them to help them secretly. They said no to him because they do not want him in trouble and they think he is government side. I wonder what will be in next part.

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