Posted by y912f on Thursday, January 7, 2010 at 5:32pm.
Are you going to college or university next year? If so, you'd better get used to the idea that essay = minimum of 5 paragraphs. It also means you need to PLAN your thoughts before you write.
We've been over and over the writing process with you. Go back and find out what you need to do ... then do it. Please don't post again until you have a sufficient essay.
You were supposed to compare and contrast. I am not certain you did that, but rather, you seemed to describe some energy sources.
It seems to me that you would have looked at each one with the same criteria: Cost, availability, geographic locations of fuel, environmental considerations. This would given a reader the material to draw conclusions on one fuel vs another.
ok , sorry i just saw this.
my teacher said it's an essay question, but it doesn't really have to be as long as an essay. it can be upto 1-2 paragraphs.
and bobpursley i will try to go back and do what you said.
thanks
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/comparcontrast.html
Here's a very good explanation about how to write comparison/contrast papers.
Y -- you can follow your "teacher's" advice -- but a one or two paragraph compare and contrast essay does not further your education or prepare you for any kind of college writing.
You're going to have to decide whether you're going to stick with the extremely mediocre advice of your homeschool "teacher" and forget college -- or -- follow the advice of Writeacher, Bobpursley, GuruBlue and other Jiskha tutors -- and work at becoming educated as well as you would have been in a regular school.
It's up to you! But frankly, we're discouraged with your writing skills.
well, honestly, for now i am going to follow my teacher's advice, since she's the one grading this. i think it's better if i stick to her directions.
OK. That's your choice. But please do not take our time by posting here if you intend to ignore our advice.
We're sorry you're just thinking of the easiest way to get a grade -- and not thinking ahead to the demands of college.
Ms. Sue sounds like she was having an off day... ^^^
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