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Some people believe that empire expansion is another way to protect a nations culture and religion by expanding, oppressing other cultures. But by expanding you leave your culture and religion vulnerable by being introduced to new cultures as you expand, people from your nation will be converting to different religions. An example of how empire expansion can reduce your cultural and religious concentration is the, Moors invasion of Spain. After settling in Spain some of the Moors converted from Islam to Christianity, this growing Christianity population allowed the people of Spain to reclaim what was once theirs.

Some people believe that empire expansion is another way to protect a nation's culture and religion by invading and oppressing other cultures. However, by expanding (do not use"you") the invading nation leaves its culture and religion vulnerable to new cultures. delete- as you expand, people from your nation will be converting to different religions. An example of how empire expansion can reduce delete - your cultural and religious concentration is the Moor's invasion of Spain. After settling in Spain some of the Moors converted from Islam to Christianity , This growing Christian population allowed the people of Spain to reclaim what was once theirs.

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Some people believe that empire expansion is a way to protect a nation's culture and religion by oppressing other cultures. However, expanding can actually leave your own culture and religion vulnerable to being influenced by new cultures. As you expand, people from your nation may convert to different religions. A historical example of how empire expansion can diminish cultural and religious concentration is the Moors' invasion of Spain. After settling in Spain, some of the Moors converted from Islam to Christianity. This growing Christian population eventually led to the people of Spain reclaiming their land and culture.