Posted by mysterychicken on Tuesday, December 29, 2009 at 11:32am.
I would use "seems" as opposed to "is". Other than that, the sentence is great.
So..my backyard seems as a haven of peace to me?
-MC
My backyard seems a peaceful haven to me. <G>
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