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Posted by on Tuesday, December 29, 2009 at 11:32am.

Does this sentence make sense?

My backyard is a haven of peace.
Or, My backyard is a haven of peace for me.

Which one should I use for my observational essay?

Thanks
-MC

  • Literature - , Tuesday, December 29, 2009 at 11:33am

    I would use "seems" as opposed to "is". Other than that, the sentence is great.

  • Literature - , Tuesday, December 29, 2009 at 11:36am

    So..my backyard seems as a haven of peace to me?

    -MC

  • Literature - , Tuesday, December 29, 2009 at 12:12pm

    My backyard seems a peaceful haven to me. <G>

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