posted by Helen on .
1) Their kindness will give me the gift of patience...
does this sound okay?
2)In this method, I could learn from different areas of study and eventually narrow my path and focus on a certain aspect of the field with pure confidence.
Too many ands?
1. This sounds fine.
2. Too many ands? Try to cut some out, if possible:
In this method, I could learn from different aread of study in o rder to eventually narrow my path and focus, etc.