Posted by rfvv on Tuesday, December 22, 2009 at 3:35am.
In dates, you should write January 6, 2010 (not 6th).
You also need to put a comma after the year ("...January 6, 2010, ... ") when the sentence continues beyond the year.
You need a colon after "Gathering Time and Place" to match the others on your list.
In #5 --
5. Guidance teachers' pre-conference: At a small conference room, Dongnae Education Board at 16:00 p.m. January 6, 2010
Other teachers may see more, but I think this is all.
One other thing --
When you use 24-hour numbers to tell time, the abbreviations a.m. and p.m. don't make sense.
#s 1-4 are correct, but in #5 you need to remove "p.m." and put a comma after 16:00.
Again, other teachers may see more.
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