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September 16, 2014

Homework Help: Creative Writing

Posted by y912f on Thursday, December 17, 2009 at 5:23pm.

For my compare and contrast essay on: The Tale of Two Very Different Birthdays .
this is what I did for freewriting at first:

-16th birthday = very fun and exciting
--got presents from my whole family
--went out to eat dinner with my friends and family
--had a wonderful cake at home

-17th birthday = not very fun
--dull and boring day
--not many presents from my family and friends
--home made small cake
--didnít go out to eat

afterwards, I added a bit more detail into the freewriting:

16th birthday:
The day I turned 16 was the most fun and exciting day of my life. I got amazing presents from my whole family, which included everything I wanted. My family invited all of my friends over at our house and we got to hang out the whole day. First we went to the movie theater to watch a new movie that came out. Afterwards my whole family and all of my friends that were over went out to eat dinner at Olive Garden. When we came back home, there was a marvelous ice-cream cake waiting with my name on it. Overall my sixteenth birthday was amazing.

17th birthday:
On the other hand, my 17th birthday had to be one of the dullest and boring days of my life. I had to stay home all day and baby sit my brothers and sisters while my parents went out to run some errands. Everyone was so busy with his or her jobs that I didnít get nearly as many presents as the year before. In fact, I only got two presents from my friends, neither of them being as good as last yearís. Since my parents had so much work during the day, all of us had to eat leftovers for dinner because my mother had not gotten time to prepare anything fresh. After dinner, my siblings served a small, home-made cake that they made by themselves a few days earlier. In conclusion, this birthday was not how I expected to turn 17.


How should I organize my essay? Aside from teh intro and conclusion, how should i focus the middle (body) three paragraphs?
I mean, obviously, one para will be on 16th and a second on teh 17th birthdya. But then, what about the third paragarph?

please tell me what would be the best way to organize and write this essay

thanks so much guys

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