posted by derrius on .
Topic: Education Issue
Thesis: There are many obstacles facing our education system today.The affect that education has are parent’s lack of involvement to teacher exasperation, and don’t forget the governments failing approach.
How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counter arguments
Please note the spelling of PSYCHOLOGY.
First, I'd rewrite your thesis statement to make it more compact and with correct spelling.
Among the problems of education are the lack of parental involvement, teacher exasperation, and inadequate government funding.
You'll need arguments and facts showing:
* how lack of parental involvement affects education
* causes and results of teacher exasperation
* results of inadequate funding
You have a lot of research to do.