Homework Help: Socials-Ms. Sue

Posted by Sara on Saturday, November 28, 2009 at 6:49pm.

I tried to express more feelings in this one.

I am stuck in a chimney, and am feeling really weak, My whole body is injured with severe burns. My health is worsening as each moment passes. The pain really hurts, I want to stay back and earn a profit for my parents, I need to live for them, but I can't. I wish I could meet them for the last time, My time is up.

Socials-Ms. Sue - GuruBlue, Saturday, November 28, 2009 at 7:27pm
This is sooo much better. The only thing I would change would be the last sentence. I would say, I think my time is up.
Socials-Ms. Sue - Sara, Saturday, November 28, 2009 at 7:34pm
thank you so much GuruBlue:-)

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