Homework Help: English

Posted by rfvv on Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 4:06pm.

What kind of work did you do as a volunteer?

1. I helped the handicapped take baths and have meals.

1-1. I helped an handicapped person take baths and have meals.

2. I went to a hospital and took care of patients there by taking them outside in wheelchairs and carrying meals for them.

3. I was with orphans at Chicago Orphanage. I played with them, I told them stories and I helped them take a bath.

4. I went to a library where I cleaned the floor and arranged books. I helped the librarian do paper work as well.

5. I went to a city hall and did erands for them. I also cleaned the city hall.

6. I went to Mt. Seorak and cleaned it by picking up garbage such as plastic bags, plastic bottle, cans, old tires, paper cups and paper.

7. I went to the Nakdong River and picked up garbage from the river and from the seashore.

8. I went to a nursing home, and read books to elderly people and sang songs for them.

9. I went to a senior center with my close friends and distributed food which we prepared for them. We sang songs for them. We also massaged elderly people there.

(Please correct errors in the sentences above. Thank you for your help. Have a good day!)

English - Writeacher, Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 4:19pm
1. I helped the handicapped take baths and have meals. good

1-1. I helped a handicapped person take baths and have meals.

2. I went to a hospital and took care of patients there by taking them outside in wheelchairs and carrying meals for them. good

3. I spent time with children at the Chicago Orphanage. I played with them, told them stories, and helped them take a bath. <~~Note the corrections I made in this last sentence.

4. I went to a library where I cleaned the floor and arranged books. I helped the librarian do paper work as well. good

5. I went to a city hall and did errands for them. I also cleaned the city hall.

6. I went to Mt. Seorak and cleaned it by picking up garbage such as plastic bags, plastic bottle, cans, old tires, paper cups and paper. good

7. I went to the Nakdong River and picked up garbage from the river and the riverbank.

8. I went to a nursing home, read books to elderly people, and sang songs for them. <~~Note the corrections I made.

9. I went to a senior center with my close friends and distributed food which we had prepared for them. We sang songs for them. We also massaged elderly people there.
English - GuruBlue, Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 4:54pm
I would change #6 to read -

I went to Mt. Seorak to pick up garbage such as plastic bags, plastic bottle, cans, old tires, paper cups and paper.

Or, you can put a colon after "garbage" and leave out "such as".
English - SraJMcGin, Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 7:50pm
6. I went to the mountain to pick up, etc.

Sra

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