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Homework Help: english

Posted by Theresa on Friday, November 20, 2009 at 10:06pm.

Can someone please edit my introductory paragraph? The topic is How does a death of a loved one affect you as a person?

The death of a loved one often affects a person. Hamlet lost one of the persons he cared most, his father who was murdered by his own brother, Claudius. Hamlet became furious and upset when he found out that Claudius killed Hamlets father and his mother Gertrude married Claudius a month after her husband died. When Ophelia heard about her father's death she started to go crazy. Her actions were strange when she was around people. She went insane that she committed suicide. Laertes discovered that Hamlet murdered Poloninus and was enraged, ready to get revenge. Losing a loved one affects a person in unusual ways. The loss of a family or friend can make a person go crazy, anrgy and sad.

I'm kind of stuck on the opening statement ( topic sentence) and the filler.

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