Where did you volunteer?
1. I volunteered at the Nakdong River. I picked up trash on the seashore with other volunteers. I collected plastic bottles and other things from the river. The river has become cleaner with our work.
2. I volunteered at a city hall. I helped their paperwork. I cleaned the floor, and I wiped the dust on the desks.
3. I did volunteer work at a police office. I went on an errand. I cleaned the building and the yard. I also carried things to right positions.
4. I went to an orphanage where I took care of little children. There were some handicapped children. I helped them to go out. I sang songs for them. I helped some take a shower.
5. I became a volunteer at a nursing home. I helped old people wash their bodies. I prepared food for them. I also sang songs for them with other volunteers. I was a little tired, but I felt proud of myself.
(Would you check the passages? Correct errors, please.)
In #3: I also carried things to right positions. = things to the correct positions.
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1. I volunteered at the Nakdong River, where I picked up trash on the seashore alongside other volunteers. Our main task was to collect plastic bottles and other debris from the river, contributing to its cleanliness.
2. Another volunteering experience of mine was at a city hall, where I assisted with various paperwork tasks. Additionally, I cleaned the floors and wiped the dust off the desks to maintain a tidy environment.
3. At a police office, my volunteer work involved running errands and performing cleaning duties. I was responsible for ensuring that the building and the yard were well-maintained, and I also helped in organizing and placing items in their correct positions.
4. I had the opportunity to volunteer at an orphanage, where I took care of young children, including those with disabilities. Activities included assisting them in going outside, singing songs to entertain them, and even helping some of them with their bathing routines.
5. Lastly, I became a volunteer at a nursing home, where my primary responsibilities included helping elderly individuals with their daily hygiene, preparing meals for them, and participating in group singing sessions to uplift their spirits. Though it was sometimes tiring, the sense of pride and fulfillment made the experience worthwhile.
The passages have been revised for clarity and grammar.