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Homework Help: Grammar and Composition

Posted by y912f on Wednesday, November 11, 2009 at 9:59am.

There are some people in this world that you canít live without, and then there are some other people who you just canít bear to live with. That second category is the one that I have to deal with all day, everyday. Sure sheís a few years younger than me, so what? Does that make her any more special than me, or the rest of us? Why is it that she gets all this treatment that we never received? My sister not only irritates me to a great extent, but she also makes some of my worst nightmares come true.


When itís finally time for the little monster to get up from her twelve-hour beauty sleep, she disappears in to the bathroom, leaving the cluttered bed untouched. Does she seriously expect some maid to come tidy that up for her? Itís bad enough that my parents make me share a room with such a pig; I canít believe they want me to start doing her dirty work for her too. The division between the room is clear; my side and her side. And predictably the difference is very clear too; my side is organized, good-looking, and spotless, while her side is compared to a pigís barn; messy, cluttered, and even smelly at times.


ok bobpursley, here is the intro and the first body paragraph for my speech. please if you will, fix it up for me.
thank you

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