pet peeve speech:

for the body points ms.sue told me to list three ways that my little sister irritates me. here's what i got:
1. she never makes the bed after she gets up/she never cleans her part of the room
2. she hogs the computer so no one else can use it
3. she listens on the phone when i'm talking to my friends

then, i can extend on these in the actual speech.

is it ok?

Yes, that is excellent. Now your task will be to describe these humously.

as...

when the little pig get up from her much needed beauty sleep (she never gets enough), she leaves her bed untouched, waiting for her chamber maid to magically appear. Who is this Princess that lives in my room? Who is the Gift to the World, that leaves dirty clothes on the floor and on furniture? Am I the chambermaid?

Or such. Do a good job.

haha

thanks bobpursley, i will try

Yes, your list of three ways your little sister irritates you is a good start for the body points of your pet peeve speech. Now, let's explain how you can extend on these points in your actual speech:

1. She never makes the bed after she gets up/she never cleans her part of the room:
In your speech, you can elaborate on this point by explaining how important it is to have a clean and organized living space. Talk about how you value cleanliness and how your sister's negligence in this area causes frustration for you. You can also share specific instances or examples to illustrate your point.

2. She hogs the computer so no one else can use it:
When discussing this point in your speech, you can emphasize the importance of sharing and considerate behavior. Explain how monopolizing the computer prevents others from using it for both entertainment and important tasks. You may want to share anecdotes or examples of how this behavior has inconvenienced you or affected your daily routine.

3. She listens on the phone when I'm talking to my friends:
In your speech, you can talk about the importance of privacy and personal boundaries. Explain how eavesdropping on your conversations with friends is tantamount to invading your personal space. Share specific instances or examples where your sister's nosiness on the phone has caused embarrassment or discomfort for both you and your friends.

Remember to provide supporting details and examples for each point to make your speech more engaging and relatable to your audience. Additionally, consider structuring your speech with an introduction, body (these three points), and a conclusion that summarizes your thoughts and offers a potential solution or resolution to the issue.