Posted by mysterychicken on Saturday, October 31, 2009 at 11:09am.
I'd leave out "In my opinion" because, since you are writing this, it's obvious that it IS your opinion unless you cite another author.
Also, be sure to put quotation marks around the title of the story.
Otherwise, it sounds OK.
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