Homework Help Forum: English

Posted by rfvv on Friday, October 30, 2009 at 3:10am.

Lisa thinks the people will be happy in the future. They will enjoy their holidays and can travel to the space. But Tommy thinks the people will be unhappy in the future. They will suffer from hunger and air pollution. (Would you like to correct the passage? Thank you.)

• English - Writeacher, Friday, October 30, 2009 at 8:12am

  The only thing I'd do is to remove "the" before "people" in the two places where this occurs. Otherwise, it's fine.

  
  

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