Hi there, could you please see if I have translated the french correctly into english. I was having a bit of trouble.
1.) I think schools should continue to invest money into these programs for the students because through group and team play, students can enrich their social life, improve their communication skills and develop leadership potential that cannot be delivered in a classroom setting.
(For example; students who join sports activities like basketball, football and swimming must learn how to properly plan and communicate with each other in order to form a successful team.)
1.) Je pense que les écoles devraient continuer à investir l'argent dans ces programmes pour les étudiants parce que par le jeu de groupe et d'équipe, les étudiants peuvent enrichir leur vie sociale, améliorer leurs qualifications de communication et développer le potentiel de conduite qui ne peut pas être fourni dans un arrangement de salle de classe. (Par exemple ; les étudiants qui joignent des activités de sports comme le basket-ball, le football et la natation doivent apprendre comment correctement prévoir et communiquer les uns avec les autres afin de former une équipe réussie.)
2.)Another reason for why schools should continue to invest money into these programs for student is because extracurricular activities teach children how to multitask and manage their time as they juggle school, friends and family. It helps students achieve a sense of balance and fulfillment in their lives.
2.) Une autre raison de pourquoi les écoles devraient continuer à investir l'argent dans ces programmes pour l'étudiant est parce que les activités hors programme enseignent à des enfants comment au multitask et contrôlent leur temps pendant qu'elles jonglent l'école, les amis et la famille. Elle aide des étudiants à réaliser un sens de l'équilibre et de la réalisation en leurs vies.
3.) I think schools should stop investing money into these programs for students because students become very committed to these programs that they spend less time studying and doing homework. This can create stress and put pressure on the student as they begin to fail their courses and eventually are kicked out of their club because their grades were too low.
3.)Je pense que les écoles devraient cesser d'investir l'argent dans ces programmes pour des étudiants parce que les étudiants deviennent très commis à ces programmes qu'ils passent moins de temps étudiant et faisant le travail. Ceci peut créer l'effort et faire pression sur l'étudiant pendant qu'ils commencent à échouer leurs cours et par la suite sont donnés un coup de pied hors de leur club parce que leurs catégories étaient si basses.
4.) Another reason schools should stop investing money into these programs is because they can have detrimental health effects on the students. For example some students who are obsessed with doing well especially in physical activities become the victims of eating disorders or anxiety attacks.
4.) Des autres écoles de raison devraient cesser d'investir l'argent dans ces programmes est parce qu'elles peuvent exercer des effets sur la santé nuisibles sur les étudiants. Par exemple quelques étudiantes qui sont hantées avec faire bien particulièrement dans des activités physiques deviennent les victimes des troubles de la nutrition ou des attaques d'inquiétude.
Thanks a bunch!
Trouble? Excellent job on #1. In #2, "for student " would be slightly better with "for the student"...
#4. Some other schools of reason (odd choice of words together)...
très bien fait
Sra (aka Mme)
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Great effort with your translations! Here is a review of your translations:
1.) I think schools should continue to invest money into these programs for the students because through group and team play, students can enrich their social life, improve their communication skills and develop leadership potential that cannot be delivered in a classroom setting. (For example; students who join sports activities like basketball, football and swimming must learn how to properly plan and communicate with each other in order to form a successful team.)
Your translation is correct:
"I think schools should continue to invest money in these programs for students because through group and team play, students can enrich their social life, improve their communication skills, and develop leadership potential that cannot be provided in a classroom setting. (For example, students who participate in sports activities like basketball, football, and swimming must learn how to properly plan and communicate with each other in order to form a successful team.)"
2.) Another reason for why schools should continue to invest money into these programs for student is because extracurricular activities teach children how to multitask and manage their time as they juggle school, friends, and family. It helps students achieve a sense of balance and fulfillment in their lives.
Your translation has a few minor errors:
"Another reason why schools should continue to invest money in these programs for students is because extracurricular activities teach children how to multitask and manage their time while juggling school, friends, and family. It helps students achieve a sense of balance and fulfillment in their lives."
3.) I think schools should stop investing money into these programs for students because students become very committed to these programs that they spend less time studying and doing homework. This can create stress and put pressure on the student as they begin to fail their courses and eventually are kicked out of their club because their grades were too low.
Your translation is correct:
"I think schools should stop investing money in these programs for students because students become so committed to these programs that they spend less time studying and doing homework. This can create stress and put pressure on the students as they start failing their courses and eventually get kicked out of their club because their grades are too low."
4.) Another reason schools should stop investing money into these programs is because they can have detrimental health effects on the students. For example, some students who are obsessed with doing well, especially in physical activities, become the victims of eating disorders or anxiety attacks.
Your translation is mostly correct:
"Another reason schools should stop investing money in these programs is because they can have harmful health effects on the students. For example, some students who are obsessed with doing well, especially in physical activities, become victims of eating disorders or anxiety attacks."
Overall, your translations are good! You have captured the main ideas accurately. Keep up the good work!