Posted by Jake on Thursday, October 29, 2009 at 8:06pm.
Hi we had to write a poem for english class, i was wondering if mine was any good? I also was wondering if the last two lines sounded ok i wasnt sure.
Fighting is a major part of the world today
Which makes others just want to stay away
Stressing the problems that they face
Is what destroys the human race
Getting along seems to be the easy way out
Rather than doing that we just want to shout
By releasing the anger from within
The pain is equivalent to being stabbed by a pin
Why canít we all just get along?
Instead we insist we donít belong
By putting our problems aside
We can stop the nationís divide
Weíre only as far as we allow ourselves to be
So donít take the easy way out, donít flee
Being rude and hurtful will be your demise
So stop being hateful and start being wise
Do the right thing and stop all this pain
The world can be better if we just maintain
A positive attitude and love for one another
To create a bond as strong as that of a brother
- English - Sara, Thursday, October 29, 2009 at 8:18pm
So beautiful, this is an extraordinary poem you've created. I really love it.
Seriously, I don't even think a senior could have done better, that is if you're a junior.
- English - Jake, Thursday, October 29, 2009 at 8:32pm
Haha thanks you're far to kind :)
- English - Sara, Thursday, October 29, 2009 at 8:52pm
thanks, you're just too good:-)
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