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September 17, 2014

Homework Help: Grammar and Composition

Posted by y912f on Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 3:32pm.

Paragraph 3 (second point of your thesis)
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After the trip to the river, the picnic spots were the next stop. There was so much variety that it was hard to decide where to eat. My preference is to sit in such a place where there is nothing but nature all around. There is one spot that has a picnic table, and from there you can hear the river behind you. Even while eating the river is calming you and easing all your troubles. The picnic spots where most of the people crowd and have parties are just not for me.

i know ths is nt descriptive enough..i'm hoping someone can help me fix it up. it is not showing as much as it is telling. please help

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