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Posted by David Chaney on Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 2:58pm.

Is this a good thesis statement for an expository essay on Alcoholism ? Throughout history , Alcoholism has caused one to be viewed by society as ethically or morally weak , but through Alcoholic Anonymous , help is available for Alcoholism .

• com . 150 - Writeacher, Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 3:09pm

  (The word "alcoholism" does not have a capital A.) It's an OK thesis statement, but not very catchy. Read the poor and redone thesis statements here and see how you can make yours better: http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

  
  

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