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Homework Help: Grammar and Composition

Posted by y912f on Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 12:43pm.

for my descriptive essay, my teachaer approved the Asheville outline that i made...that's why i was waiting to start writing.
here is the extended outline. please make any corrections:

Broad Subject: vacation spots
Limited Topic: Asheville, North Carolina
Main idea about this topic: fun place
Thesis without three-step format: Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit
Three-step Format for thesis: river, picnic spots, ice-cream parlor
Thesis with three-step format: Asheville, North Carolina, is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of its refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors.

Outline
Introduction: Paragraph 1
a. Main idea for the essay – Asheville is a fun place
b. Thesis-Asheville, North Carolina, is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of its refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors.

Body: Topic sentences for paragraphs 2, 3, and 4
a. Asheville’s river is refreshing and relaxing (paragraph 2)
b. The picnic spots are beautiful and peaceful (paragraph 3)
c. There are various ice-cream parlors for more fun and enjoyment (paragraph 4)

Conclusion: Paragraph 5
a. Restated thesis statement—Asheville is a good vacation spot
b. Ends with a clincher—


(i'm not sure about the last thing--clincher)

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