Homework Help Forum: Grammar and Composition

Posted by y912f on Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 1:37pm.

ok. how's this so far for an outline: 1. vacation spots - broad subject 2. Asheville, North Carolina - limited topic for thesis statement 3. Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit - Main Idwa about This Topic 4. -river, -picnic spots, -ice-cream parlor - Three-Step Format for Thesis Statement 5. Asheville, North Carolina is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of it's refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors. so far so good?

• Grammar and Composition - Ms. Sue, Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 2:23pm

  See my previous answers.

  
  

• Grammar and Composition - GuruBlue, Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 3:15pm

  Nope....The thesis statement that MsSue suggested would be a good one. Or, choose three things that you particularly enjoy doing there. You might begin your essay by saying " Winter always brings memories of my favorite summer vacation area." Then go from there.

  
  

• Grammar and Composition - GuruBlue, Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 3:19pm

  Asheville, North Carolina - topic for thesis statement Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit - Main Idwa about This Topic -river, -picnic spots, -ice-cream parlor - Three-Step Format for Thesis Statement 5. Asheville, North Carolina is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of it's refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors. This works out very well.

  
  

• Grammar and Composition - y912f, Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 3:26pm

  wait..so what i wrote is ok GurubLue?

  
  

• Grammar and Composition - y912f, Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 3:28pm

  because i don't think you guys understand what i have to do if you're saying that Asheville is the broad topic, then i have to pick a narrower topic and find supports for THAT. it will be easy for me to write the way i organized it..

  
  

• Grammar and Composition - Ms. Sue, Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 3:33pm

  Y -- do you want the easy way -- or the way you'll learn most, as suggested by two experienced English teachers? Your choice!

  
  

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