I have to write an essay describing the external conflict Nat Hocken from the short story 'The Birds' encounters and how he overcomes it.

This is what I got:
In The Birds, Nat Hocken, a farm worker and war veteran notices an unusual number of birds behaving strangely along the Peninsula where his family lives. As Nat opens the window of his house later that day, a number of birds strike him and disappear. He then hears screams from his children's room and rushes to them, only to find a swarm of small birds flying around the room. Nat fights them off with a blanket until dawn, when they fly away, leaving about fifty dead on the floor. On the radio, it’s announced that birds are attacking all over Britain and Nat boards all his windows and blocks the chimney. When he goes to pick up his daughter from school, the birds attack him again and he goes home with some minor injuries. Soon massive swarms of birds are diving for the house. There are planes outside, trying to get rid of the birds and when Nat goes back outside, he sees most of the people killed by the birds. The story ends with the birds continuing their attack, and Nat overcomes this by protecting himself and his family inside their house.

Is this OK?

Thanks
-MC

Yes, this seems good.

Thanks!

-MC

You're welcome.

As Nat is trying to get back home, he has his third conflict with the birds. What is particularly frightening about this one?

Yes, your essay describing the external conflict faced by Nat Hocken in the short story "The Birds" and how he overcomes it seems to cover the key events and actions accurately. You have provided a clear summary of the external conflict, which is the birds' sudden aggressive behavior and attacks on humans, including Nat and his family.

Additionally, you have mentioned how Nat overcomes this conflict by taking measures to protect himself and his family. Specifically, he boards up the windows, blocks the chimney, and fights off the attacking birds with a blanket. By doing so, he manages to keep his family safe inside their house.

To further improve your essay, you might consider including a brief analysis or insight into Nat's character or emotions during this external conflict. How does he react to the increasing danger and chaos caused by the birds? Does he demonstrate bravery, fear, determination, or any other qualities that help him overcome the conflict? Adding such details can provide a more comprehensive understanding of the character's journey.

Overall, your essay seems to provide a solid overview of the external conflict and its resolution. Good luck with your assignment!